February 15, 2005
The Terrible Old Man Writer

I've been reading with interest the letters to Salon which followed Laura Miller's quasi-review of the new Library of America edition of H.P. Lovecraft's short stories (a one-volume selection, mind you, not the complete set). It's really a review of Lovecraft's reputation, and Miller doesn't exactly do a hatchet job, but her mixed verdict prompts some thoughts of my own -- some in support of her view, and some dissenting slightly. (I know, that's not a very compelling hook to get you to keep reading along, but you're already here, so why not see it through?)

No one who wrote in is apparently happy with Miller's essay, perhaps because only Lovecraft fans are writing in -- and Lovecraft has a current readership that I would say is divided into those who found his style off-putting and clunky and dismissable in the first place, and those who've taken him almost wholly to heart, warts and all. Miller, who seems to belong to the first camp, hooks her essay precisely on that whompingly heavy style, a syrup of adjectives further sweetened with the invariable additive of exotic names and references to a set of supposed arcane texts and legendary cultures. He is, she proclaims, a "bad writer," meaning that his repetetive and fevered prose style, his commitment to tell rather than show, and his endlessly telegraphed punches make him an author any intelligent reader must treat as an object of campy, rather than straightforward, appreciation.

There's something to this -- Lovecraft's prose is often more obstacle than enabler of readerly pleasure and emotional engagement. Her notion that Lovecraft is still read in an exclusively campy vein is entirely wrong-headed, but understandable in that (as with Tolkein), Lovecraft's excesses and excellences are woven together so tightly that serious admirers of the latter can still laugh at the former.

Miller goes on, more convincingly, to note that what *is* seriously disturbing in Lovecraft certainly looks to most of us like a relatively direct expression of a tightly wound character: " The kernel of Lovecraft's neurosis is a hopeless tangle of sex, race and bodily decay, fed by the tragedies and frustrations of his private life." Often sublimated into images of disgust, ooze, and lunatic disorder, sex can be hard to find in Lovecraft (although see "The Dunwich Horror" for an example of a shockingly straightforward use of a sexual abomination), but the element of race -- and Lovecraft's overwhelming xenophobia -- is everywhere.

The author's race-hatred is arguably the only really embarassing thing for many Lovecraft fans -- it's what makes you hesitate to offer up his work to a Stephen King reader who's never dipped into "The Shadow over Innsmouth." Purple prose is nothing compared to the relentless stereotyping of nonwhites as primitive and even demonic. And it doesn't sit any easier when you come to realize that in a mythos based on the terror of radical Otherness, it's not an incidental fact that he renders with loathing pretty much every ethinic subgroup from back-country Vermonters to former slaves in the Deep South, to, well...as Miller notes, it's only those of Anglo-Saxon upper-class descent that don't already come questionable in a Lovecraft tale.

Miller does hint at -- but never delves too deeply into -- the primary reason why Lovecraft still has readers despite problems like the above: the sense of coherent power -- what a critic like Harold Bloom might call a visionary power -- in the mythos which knit together almost all of his most powerful tales. Perhaps it's true that the close of a Lovecraft story often doesn't seem to carry an overpowering sting to the modern reader (though the long story "The Whisperer in the Darkness" and the short "Pickman's Model" both end with a good bang). But I'd argue that for many of us the pleasure is in the long, "dull" buildup. The uncovering of the actual crisis is stretched and stretched in many Lovecraft tales, until the atmosphere is supersaturated, not so much with dread as with a kind of fascination -- in what form will it manifest itself this time? Lovecraft's horror always seems to be at a short remove from the pure pleasures of fantasy. Each story is a version, another shadow, another window into his intriguingly haunted world. The pleasure in the reading is rarely about the what's-behind-the-door suspense -- and it only reveals itself fully, I'd argue, after you've read enough of the stories to take pleasure in spotting the connections that the characters within them aren't, necessarily, aware of.

And while the mythos might be fed by the wellsprings of an uncomfortably obvious sexual (self-?) disgust and a shameful fear of the nonwhite Other, Lovecraft successfully transforms these nasty personal discontents into something closer to the universal -- the dread of discovery that our carefully constructed narrative of personal order and meaning is just that -- a narrative woven to hide an unthinkable reality. In the case of the horror tale, that reality is one of implacably hostile cosmic forces, but isn't the blind indifference of the universe to our singular and collective fates no less arresting? The confrontation with that moment is what fuels a lot of what the 20th century called great art. I won't make the case that Lovecraft is great art, but -- no camp intended -- he's still, for some of us, great reading.

(By the way, if you like this sort of thing and haven't seen Neil Gaiman's ingenious Lovecraft/Conan Doyle pastiche, hie yourself here for "A Study in Emerald.")

Posted by BT at February 15, 2005 07:12 PM
Comments

1. Thanks for the pointer to the Gaiman story, which I think is just great. It's a wonderful synthesis of the extremely rational and the extremely irrational worlds of the two writers, both with their own relentless logic.

2. I tried reading Lovecraft for the first time this year, and there is something hypnotic and compelling about his prose, as purple as it is. That said, a little went a long way with me. But I like your analysis of his extremely Other personages.

Posted by: Gavin on February 16, 2005 03:16 PM

I've never read any Lovecraft, though of course I'm familiar with him in that fellow-traveller SF/fantasy-reader kind of way (more a "former-SF/fantasy reader" these days, but you know what I mean). But this is an interesting post even for those of us on the outer - thanks, Bill.

Posted by: Rory on February 17, 2005 06:53 AM

As long as we're talking, here's the short list of Lovecraft stories I have liked the best, with some notes about the objectionable elements.

"The Shadow over Innsmouth" -- One of the best in terms of pure story, more action-packed than most of Lovecraft. Tourism at its most ill-advised. You'll see the ending coming, but it feels right just the same. Racism level: mostly transformed into a less-than-obviously-offensive portrait of a town gone bad, but there is certainly a prevailing loathing of race-mixing that can't be wished away.

"The Dunwich Horror" -- Although its more retrospective, narrated quality gives it a distance that makes it seem less urgent than Innsmouth, this tale of a very nasty breeding experiment has a terrific plot and multiple climactic moments, and the ending is a strong one. Racism level: depends on how you see it. The portrait of a poor white New England community here is rank with stereotype and the suggestion that the rural underclass have "decayed" to a subhuman level.

"The Whisperer in the Darkness" -- more of a science-fiction/X-files type of horror story (though a horror story nevertheless), this one is one of those slow-builds-to-a-very-creepy-conclusion type of tales. Takes more patience than the above two, but also is thankfully free of annoying New England "dialect," which mars the previous two a bit. Racism level: I don't recall any specific instances, but I wouldn't be surprised if it crops up in the incidentals.

"Pickman's Model" -- a short exercise in silly fun at the expense of pretentiously aesthetic painters. Some might find this one tips over into camp, but it's still not a story I'd read by myself late at night. Racism level: shockingly anti-ghoul!

"The Shadow Out of Time" -- more meditative and an example of the horror taking a backseat to the sense of the fantastic. Racism level: not =bad at all, with only a glancing and period-typical reference to Australian aboriginals as primitive "blackfellows," and a few characterizations of various ancient nations and ethnicities through a kind of derogatory shorthand ("squat, yellow Inuit" for example).

"The Rats in the Walls" -- one of Lovecraft's rare forays into gross-out horror. Riveting but not for the weak of stomach. Racism level: the narrator's black cat (unfortunately central to the story) has a name that says volumes about Lovecraft's attitude toward African-Americans. Beyond that, it's OK.

"The Colour Out of Space" -- widely regarded to be his best and most subtle story, and one of the author's favorites. Racism level: not, to my memory, an issue.

Overrated: "The Call of Cthulhu" -- foundational to the "mythos" but not really all that good a story.

Posted by: BT on February 17, 2005 11:56 AM